Screenplay - Final Version
Media Studies Coursework
Screenplay
Batcave Productions
In Deep
INT. UNMARKED POLICE CAR, ROAD
CID1 CHECKS his earpiece
CID1
Check yours to.
CID2 CHECKS his earpiece
CID2
Yeah, it’s on.
HQ radios in
HQ
Everything is under control,
Do you need assistance?
CID2 TOUCHES his earpiece
CID2
Nah, it’s all good for now.
Are you sure that Kelvin Rimante is going to come
Here for such a small deal?
WOMAN CALLING in from HQ.
HQ
Intel says he is. Apparently
he hasn’t got his henchmen running this errand.
He’s dangerous As you two know.
3 years now and still on the loose. He made all the most wanted crime lists. He’s like the MJ of crime.
CID1 looks towards the JUNKIE while HOLDING up a snapshot of the drug dealer.
CID1
Our guy better turn up.
CID2
He’ll be here.
EXT. ALLEYWAY, ROAD
DRUG DEALER WALKS up to the JUNKIE with his hood up.
JUNKIE
You got what I want?
DRUG DEALER PULLS OUT a bag of drugs from his pockets and SHOWS it to the JUNKIE.
INT. UNMARKED POLICE CAR, ROAD
CID1
That’s all we need,
I’m moving in!
CID1 GETS OUT of the car and RUNS towards the DRUG DEALER and JUNKIE and PULLS out badge.
CID1
CID! Don’t move !
DRUG DEALER and JUNKIE TURN around and RUN down the alleyway.
DRUG DEALER
Split up!
JUNKIE TURNS left while DRUG DEALER KEEPS straight. CID1 CHASES the DRUG DEALER and PUTS his hand on the earpiece.
CID1
You get the JUNKIE.
I’ve got this prick!
He went left, Now! Move!
EXT. UNMARKED POLICE CAR, ROAD
CID2
I’m on it!
CID2 DRIVES OFF in car to get JUNKIE.
EXT. WALKWAY, STREET
CID1 and DRUG DEALER JUMP over fences.
EXT. BRIDGE, MOTORWAY
CID1 and DRUG DEALER RUN across motorway bridge.
EXT. CAR PARK, NIGHTCLUB
JUNKIE RUNS through the car park. CID2 INTERSECTS JUNKIE with car. CID2 GETS out of the car and OPENS back door, JUNKIE RUNS up to the car EXHAUSTED.
EXT. PATHWAY, STREET
CID1
Got ya!
CID1 TACKLES DRUG DEALER and they begin to FIGHT. CID1 FLOORS the DRUG DEALER to the ground and PULLS down his hood.
CID1
Who the fuck are you?
DRUG DEALER GASPING for breath.
DRUG DEALER
Ha ha. . . I wonder how your partner is doing?
CID1 TIGHTENS his grip and PULLS him CLOSER.
CID1
Where is Rimante? I want answers, Now!
DRUG DEALER OPENS mouth to TALK. CID1 HEARS a car approaching and LOOKS up. Gun is pointing out of the window. CID1 DIVES for cover and PULLS out his gun.
CID1
What the fuck!
DRUG DEALER SCREAMS
DRUG DEALER
NO. NO..... !
MAN in car SHOOTS at the DRUG DEALER and KILLS him. MAN in car DRIVES off.CID1 COMES out FIRING at the car and CHECKS on DECOY DRUG DEALER.
CID1 CALLS HQ through his earpiece.
CID1
Rimante used a decoy. Call backup.
Run a background check on this plate.
Sierra Charlie
0 4
Echo Charlie Japan. I’m going after him.
CID1 CALLS CID2 through the earpiece while CROUCHING over the dead body.
CID1
Come pick me up quick! We got a
Chase on our hands.
RIMASNTE REPLIES in a coarse voice
RIMANTE
If you want your partner back, you’re going to have to give my life back.
.....
Monday, 23 November 2009
Screenplay - First Draft
Media Studies Coursework
Screenplay
Batcave Productions
In Deep
INT. UNMARKED POLICE CAR, ROAD
CID1 CHECKS his earpiece
CID1
Check yours to.
CID2 CHECKS his earpiece
CID2
Yeah, it’s on.
HQ radios in
HQ
Everything is under control,
Do you need assistance?
CID2 TOUCHES his earpiece
CID2
Nah, it’s all good for now.
Are you sure that Kelvin Rimante is going to come
Here for such a small deal?
WOMAN CALLING in from HQ CHUCKLES.
HQ
Our info says that he is. Looks like
he hasn’t got any henchmen running his errands.
He’s dangerous boys
and only you two know his ways best. You have been tracking him for 3 years now. Interpol most wanted list,13 known murders, drug trafficking and more major convictions.
CID1 looks towards the JUNKIE while HOLDING up a snapshot of the drug dealer.
CID1
Our guy better turn up.
CID2
He’ll be here, then
We can nail ‘im.
EXT. ALLEYWAY, ROAD
DRUG DEALER WALKS up to the JUNKIE with his hood up.
JUNKIE
You got what I want?
DRUG DEALER PULLS OUT a bag of drugs from his pockets and SHOWS it to the JUNKIE.
INT. UNMARKED POLICE CAR, ROAD
CID1
That’s all we need,
I’m moving in!
CID1 GETS OUT of the car and RUNS towards the DRUG DEALER and JUNKIE and PULLS out badge.
CID1
CID! Don’t move !
DRUG DEALER and JUNKIE TURN around and RUN down the alleyway.
DRUG DEALER
Split up!
JUNKIE TURNS left while DRUG DEALER KEEPS straight. CID1 CHASES the DRUG DEALER and PUTS his hand on the earpiece.
CID1
You get the JUNKIE.
I’ve got this prick!
He went left, Now! Move!
EXT. UNMARKED POLICE CAR, ROAD
CID2
I’m on it!
CID2 DRIVES OFF in car to get JUNKIE.
EXT. WALKWAY, STREET
CID1 and DRUG DEALER JUMP over fences.
EXT. BRIDGE, MOTORWAY
CID1 and DRUG DEALER RUN across motorway bridge.
EXT. CAR PARK, NIGHTCLUB
JUNKIE RUNS through the car park. CID2 INTERSECTS JUNKIE with car. CID2 GETS out of the car and OPENS back door, JUNKIE RUNS up to the car EXHAUSTED.
EXT. PATHWAY, STREET
CID1
Got ya!
CID1 TACKLES DRUG DEALER and they begin to FIGHT. CID1 FLOORS the DRUG DEALER to the ground and PULLS down his hood.
CID1
Who the fuck are you?
DRUG DEALER GASPING for breath.
DRUG DEALER
Ha ha. . . I wonder how your partner is doing?
CID1 TIGHTENS his grip and PULLS him CLOSER.
CID1
Where is Rimante? I want answers, Now!
DRUG DEALER OPENS mouth to TALK. CID1 HEARS a car approaching and LOOKS up. Gun is pointing out of the window. CID1 DIVES for cover and PULLS out his gun.
CID1
What the fuck!
DRUG DEALER SCREAMS
DRUG DEALER
NO. NO..... !
MAN in car SHOOTS at the DRUG DEALER and KILLS him. MAN in car DRIVES off.CID1 COMES out FIRING at the car and CHECKS on DECOY DRUG DEALER.
CID1 CALLS HQ through his earpiece.
CID1
Rimante used a decoy. Call backup.
Run a background check on this plate.
Sierra Charlie
0 4
Echo Charlie Japan. I’m going after him.
CID1 CALLS CID2 through the earpiece while CROUCHING over the dead body.
CID1
Come pick me up quick! We got a
Chase on our hands.
RIMASNTE REPLIES in a coarse voice
RIMANTE
If you want your partner back, you’re going to have to give my life back.
.....
Media Studies Coursework
Screenplay
Batcave Productions
In Deep
INT. UNMARKED POLICE CAR, ROAD
CID1 CHECKS his earpiece
CID1
Check yours to.
CID2 CHECKS his earpiece
CID2
Yeah, it’s on.
HQ radios in
HQ
Everything is under control,
Do you need assistance?
CID2 TOUCHES his earpiece
CID2
Nah, it’s all good for now.
Are you sure that Kelvin Rimante is going to come
Here for such a small deal?
WOMAN CALLING in from HQ CHUCKLES.
HQ
Our info says that he is. Looks like
he hasn’t got any henchmen running his errands.
He’s dangerous boys
and only you two know his ways best. You have been tracking him for 3 years now. Interpol most wanted list,13 known murders, drug trafficking and more major convictions.
CID1 looks towards the JUNKIE while HOLDING up a snapshot of the drug dealer.
CID1
Our guy better turn up.
CID2
He’ll be here, then
We can nail ‘im.
EXT. ALLEYWAY, ROAD
DRUG DEALER WALKS up to the JUNKIE with his hood up.
JUNKIE
You got what I want?
DRUG DEALER PULLS OUT a bag of drugs from his pockets and SHOWS it to the JUNKIE.
INT. UNMARKED POLICE CAR, ROAD
CID1
That’s all we need,
I’m moving in!
CID1 GETS OUT of the car and RUNS towards the DRUG DEALER and JUNKIE and PULLS out badge.
CID1
CID! Don’t move !
DRUG DEALER and JUNKIE TURN around and RUN down the alleyway.
DRUG DEALER
Split up!
JUNKIE TURNS left while DRUG DEALER KEEPS straight. CID1 CHASES the DRUG DEALER and PUTS his hand on the earpiece.
CID1
You get the JUNKIE.
I’ve got this prick!
He went left, Now! Move!
EXT. UNMARKED POLICE CAR, ROAD
CID2
I’m on it!
CID2 DRIVES OFF in car to get JUNKIE.
EXT. WALKWAY, STREET
CID1 and DRUG DEALER JUMP over fences.
EXT. BRIDGE, MOTORWAY
CID1 and DRUG DEALER RUN across motorway bridge.
EXT. CAR PARK, NIGHTCLUB
JUNKIE RUNS through the car park. CID2 INTERSECTS JUNKIE with car. CID2 GETS out of the car and OPENS back door, JUNKIE RUNS up to the car EXHAUSTED.
EXT. PATHWAY, STREET
CID1
Got ya!
CID1 TACKLES DRUG DEALER and they begin to FIGHT. CID1 FLOORS the DRUG DEALER to the ground and PULLS down his hood.
CID1
Who the fuck are you?
DRUG DEALER GASPING for breath.
DRUG DEALER
Ha ha. . . I wonder how your partner is doing?
CID1 TIGHTENS his grip and PULLS him CLOSER.
CID1
Where is Rimante? I want answers, Now!
DRUG DEALER OPENS mouth to TALK. CID1 HEARS a car approaching and LOOKS up. Gun is pointing out of the window. CID1 DIVES for cover and PULLS out his gun.
CID1
What the fuck!
DRUG DEALER SCREAMS
DRUG DEALER
NO. NO..... !
MAN in car SHOOTS at the DRUG DEALER and KILLS him. MAN in car DRIVES off.CID1 COMES out FIRING at the car and CHECKS on DECOY DRUG DEALER.
CID1 CALLS HQ through his earpiece.
CID1
Rimante used a decoy. Call backup.
Run a background check on this plate.
Sierra Charlie
0 4
Echo Charlie Japan. I’m going after him.
CID1 CALLS CID2 through the earpiece while CROUCHING over the dead body.
CID1
Come pick me up quick! We got a
Chase on our hands.
RIMASNTE REPLIES in a coarse voice
RIMANTE
If you want your partner back, you’re going to have to give my life back.
.....
Monday, 9 November 2009
Evaluation
1) The process we went through to reach our genre about was we added all our idea's together and saw the basic analysing themes of all our ideas, which happened to be a horror/comedy genre.
2) During the process we used several creative methods and changes in the process due to several things gthat could not be feasible in the end.
3) Our preliminary could be improved by improving continuity, such as same clothes etc. such as when we accidentally were shooting a scene and the cameraman could visibly be seen in a mirror in the location, in our main task these mistakes need to be corrected.
4) Next time we will will change possible genre, towards another genre outside of usual expected ones such as crime/action with a twist, also outside of our pre -lim genre.
5) we changed several things during the actual shooting process due to problems or impossibilities with location and the people in and around it, as it was a public location. also shot angles could have been changed to show superiority. Furthermore the weapon used could have been made more realistic, The Speed of door entry, the use of dialogue overall, and more use of in depth dialogue and cutting any unnecessary items out.
2) During the process we used several creative methods and changes in the process due to several things gthat could not be feasible in the end.
3) Our preliminary could be improved by improving continuity, such as same clothes etc. such as when we accidentally were shooting a scene and the cameraman could visibly be seen in a mirror in the location, in our main task these mistakes need to be corrected.
4) Next time we will will change possible genre, towards another genre outside of usual expected ones such as crime/action with a twist, also outside of our pre -lim genre.
5) we changed several things during the actual shooting process due to problems or impossibilities with location and the people in and around it, as it was a public location. also shot angles could have been changed to show superiority. Furthermore the weapon used could have been made more realistic, The Speed of door entry, the use of dialogue overall, and more use of in depth dialogue and cutting any unnecessary items out.
Sunday, 1 November 2009
Opening Blog Message
Hey everyone, and welcome to scott nicholson's jrcs media blog, where i will post updates about media progress etc. :)
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